I sent out two flash fiction stories this week, both to Flash Fiction Online. It'll probably be awhile before I hear anything, so I get to play the waiting game. Both stories,
Gotcha and
True Love, were rebuilt from short-short stories I did for a college course. I rewrote most of each and changed a few things around as well as adding parts (both were under 500 words).
They both kind of depart from my style as of late, and have a more serious tone--although I think
True Love still has my usual sarcastic humor, just presented differently. I had to really tone the violence/gore of
Gotcha (original title: "Space Pirate Steve"...don't ask), because it just didn't sit well with me and felt like (back in college) I was trying too hard for the gross out factor. Reading over that one and
True Love (original title: "She") made me realize just how much I've grown as a writer since college, heck even in the last year or so. I also cut out all of the profanity of True Love, because a) Flash Fiction Online doesn't want it and b) I just didn't like it and again it came across as me trying too hard.
Gotcha ended up being closer to a horror story than the sci-fi adventure it started as, but that's fine by me. I realized that as I was revising it and decided to just go for it, trashing the gore aspect and going for the bizarre atmosphere with a little bit of Lovecraft influence thrown in for good measure. I also changed the character Steve's name because I didn't want any connection to Steve from
Magic of Eyri ("Steve" was my utility character name for projects in school).
True Love is a first person point of view story, something I haven't written that much of--and might be my least favorite way to write. But we'll see, I could grow to like it. Writing this character's POV was fun, because of the gritty nature of the story and because of the questionable nature of the
narrator.
And I'll be honest, both of these stories are kind of creepy in their own way.
So have those two sent out and I'm still waiting to hear about Slow and Steady from another place. I'm pretty proud of myself for sending out this many short stories in the same month. Now if any ( or gasp, ALL) of the three gets bought, then there shall be cause to celebrate.